Two people barrel through seasons and hope for the best that they know isn’t going to happen in “Indonesia.”

Track: “Indonesia”
Album: All Hail West Texas (2013 reissue)

According to the liner notes of the 2013 reissue of All Hail West Texas, John Darnielle wrote “Indonesia” in one night. He says it didn’t make the album because it isn’t doesn’t fit with the rest of the story. All Hail is about “seven people, two houses, a motorcycle, and a locked treatment facility for adolescent boys” per its cover, so this is about anyone else in the world that doesn’t occupy that space.

John sings much of “Indonesia” in a low, steady tone, which gives the sense that he’s relaying facts rather than editorializing. Lines like “the summer came in carrying spring in its mouth” seem plucked out of poetry even with that delivery, but they exist here just to carry time forward. The first verse sets up that summer is typically a time of great turmoil for these two characters. John Darnielle says that this song fits more with his writing style for Tallahassee. The Alpha Couple would recognize “this is the time when all our plans and schemes melt down into listless anarchy” all too well.

The second-and-final verse explores some familiar territory for the Mountain Goats. John Darnielle talks about plants as a metaphor for loneliness, weather as an omen, and hunger as a representation for something evil. These are common lyrical elements across the catalog, and it makes one wonder why this song doesn’t hold higher regard.

The chorus is simply “Indonesia // Indonesia.” In such a powerfully wrought song full of lyrics, it’s interesting that John Darnielle left the chorus at one word. It allows you to fill the space of those two words with whatever emotions you’d like. So many Mountain Goats songs are about the belief that changing your location could change your life, but these two are just holding onto dreams.